I wrote from the perspective of the person standing against the wall, thinking that the person was a man. I couldn't tell if it was a man or woman (the painting was a little blurry). So, i asked my classmate if she knew, to which she replied that she thought it was a man as well. In fact it is a woman. So, I suppose this little story could go either way, but for me it was meant to be a man. The other perspective I chose was from the man holding the woman, who, i thought was a priest but is in fact the jail guard. A story can unravel before you just from a picture whether you know the story or not. Don't be afraid to let your imagination take you.
Just another little note: I wanted to revise this but I couldn't.
The Lover by the
pillar
I cannot watch. I cannot! I cannot watch my love going to
her death. Her mother sits at my feet on the uncomforting stone floor, the cold
pillar at her back her only support for she will find none here. How can I
console the mother of the woman who broke my heart? How can I speak words of
ease to the woman who birthed a harlot?
Jane
why could you not have loved me? Why did you find passion in the embraces of
another man? Why could you have not found love in my lips?
You
kneel there weeping, I could have saved you from those tears if you but loved
me! Never will your ears know that it was I who betrayed you. Never will your
blue eyes gaze my guilt and shame. You should have loved me! I cannot watch you
go to your death.
The Priest
“My
dear Child, do not cry,” I whisper in her ear as tears of despair moisten her
cheek. “Find comfort, child, that the
angels await you. Your crimes are forgiven. I place my hands on her sweet soft
arms to comfort her and dispel her fears. but, alas, I say these words to ease
her heart; A heart that is wicked and
treacherous ready to do the devil’s will never see the gates of God. She will spend her time in purgatory, damned, until her
family can pay. then, and only then, will she go to God.

2 comments:
wow..it is truly amazing how a picture can tell many different stories....thanks for sharing your perspective and yourself...I really enjoyed the priest side of it the best...I wonder where those characters went when they walked out of the frame?
the possibilities are endless. what journey would you take them on?
thank you azorith :)
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